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Submitted: May 19, 2008
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Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
Shutter Speed: 1/250 second
F Number: F/11.0
Focal Length: 18 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Date Picture Taken: May 16, 2008, 2:43:56 PM

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this traveling river
praying a bed
for a weary body's rest
I, bed
you, river


eclipse of
pregnant heart murmurs
across a sky of words
garden of thorns
infiltrated by roses
you smuggled -


inside a caravan
of smiling teeth
balm of petal-lips
stem of tan-soft
sweet, moist and significant like
first penetration


meeting of tributaries
mantric adagio of three words
planted beneath marrow
desert of distance
leaving time thirsty.


this traveling river
praying a bed
for a weary body's rest
you, bed
I...

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So very pretty...

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"The best trick Hell has to play against its inmates is to whisper to them that this — this now — is the bottom. Nothing can be worse than this. And then to pull the floor away." - Daniel Abraham "Flat Diane"
beautiful picture. it seems kinda muted almost like you are hovering above the water with zero background noise.

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very beautiful. there's a kind of stillness to it that makes rather simple and beautiful at the same time. i could imagine my self in the scene...LOVE IT!!!

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"Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication." -Leonardo da Vinci
great shot!

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For my part I know nothing with any certainty, but the sight of the stars makes me dream. -Vincent van Gogh
the words made the photo much better, even though it was already great.

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Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
I still love your taste :)

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"In past even future was better"
Amazing dreamland atmosphere!

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"You must do everything yourself." (First rule of Alchemy)
OH your words make me feel so many things... here... a searching, a loneliness , a desire unfulfilled ...and finally the peace of finding the journeys end.

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"Life has to be a Bitch, if it was a Slut it would be easy"
"I'd rather die while living, then live when I'm dead" Jimmy Buffett
This is amazing, and there are no words to describe your writing............it's soul stirring!

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"You May Not Know My Reason, But I Have Reason To Believe"
Absolutely beautiful. Reminds me of that Metal Gear Solid segmant where you have to walk through a river with tons of sould floating all around. Rad man.

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One small spark...

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